And Waving Part

I really need to break up with somebody so I can use Phil Larkin’s sonnet the way it was meant to be used.Ships.jpg

Love, we must part now: do not let it be
Calamitous and bitter. In the past
There has been too much moonlight and self-pity:
Let us have done with it: for now at last
Never has sun more boldly paced the sky,
Never were hearts more eager to be free,
To kick down worlds, lash forests; you and I
No longer hold them; we are husks, that see
The grain going forward to a different use.

There is regret. Always, there is regret.
But it is better that our lives unloose,
As two tall ships, wind-mastered, wet with light,
Break from an estuary with their courses set,
And waving part, and waving drop from sight.

3 Responses to “And Waving Part”


  1. 1 Ryan

    You can break up with me anytime!

  2. 2 Ryan

    Although I might be a bit offended if your breakup speech weren’t quite as poetic. In fact, I would demand a haiku.

  3. 3 Premee

    By yet another freakish coincidence, I am referred to by close friends as the Haiku Queen.

    No I’m not.

    But I should be.

    Ahem:
    “The frog brightly leaps
    A cold wind stirs the cattails
    Oh, and I’m moving.”
    :-(

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